Very nice! I liked this old guy's tone of voice, very familiar-sounding to me, like some of the old codgers out here in my rural area. Loved his observations on Ellen, and it tickled me to think of someone old enough to remember her as a child, plus a really good back-story you've created for her.
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Date: 2007-10-22 06:45 pm (UTC)Nice outside POV! Thanks for sharing.
Cheers ~
Erin