That's the problem with secret plots among the staff...sooner or later, Jed always finds out.
This is pure, unadulterated crack, but lots of fun! Your Sorkin-style of writing has all the zip and rapid-fire rapidity of the best West Wing scripts... Donna so totally has wiles... and CJ, Toby, and Leo's snippery is spot-on character.
If anything, Sam and Dean get a little too Sorkin-esque when they are interacting with the West Wingers, but... ah, who'm I kidding, it's just silly good fun.
(Though seriously? When is this, because if it's not pre-Skin (or at least Season 1) then the background checks would have been a non-starter before they got close to the staff....)
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Date: 2007-10-31 03:58 pm (UTC)This is pure, unadulterated crack, but lots of fun! Your Sorkin-style of writing has all the zip and rapid-fire rapidity of the best West Wing scripts... Donna so totally has wiles... and CJ, Toby, and Leo's snippery is spot-on character.
If anything, Sam and Dean get a little too Sorkin-esque when they are interacting with the West Wingers, but... ah, who'm I kidding, it's just silly good fun.
(Though seriously? When is this, because if it's not pre-Skin (or at least Season 1) then the background checks would have been a non-starter before they got close to the staff....)