Firstly, thank you for addressing the fact that Chekov would undoubtedly blame himself for Amanda's death, even if it was pretty much unavoidable.
Secondly, the characters are spot-on. Especially the fact that Chekov is young without being childish. The part I love most though is the way that Spock is almost benevolent with his forgiveness; it's like he doesn't think the act is necessary (why acknowledge the result when there was no action to cause it?), but recognizes that it will have the desired effect.
Finally, the ending. Awwwwww. But that's mostly because I have a longstanding love of Chekov in all his forms.
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Date: 2009-05-19 07:28 am (UTC)Secondly, the characters are spot-on. Especially the fact that Chekov is young without being childish. The part I love most though is the way that Spock is almost benevolent with his forgiveness; it's like he doesn't think the act is necessary (why acknowledge the result when there was no action to cause it?), but recognizes that it will have the desired effect.
Finally, the ending. Awwwwww. But that's mostly because I have a longstanding love of Chekov in all his forms.